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JamZ Rookie
Number of posts : 34 Age : 31 Location : Toronto ,Ontario ,Canada Registration date : 2008-08-19
| Subject: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Thu Aug 21, 2008 7:13 am | |
| jamz vs illicit 5 bars 10 lines ggg
Last edited by JamZ on Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:15 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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illicit Rookie
Number of posts : 19 Age : 34 Location : UMT, D city Registration date : 2008-07-30
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Thu Aug 21, 2008 8:23 am | |
| yo hit yo verse man.......let's do it within 5 bars.....u down hommie??? | |
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JamZ Rookie
Number of posts : 34 Age : 31 Location : Toronto ,Ontario ,Canada Registration date : 2008-08-19
| Subject: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Thu Aug 21, 2008 4:15 pm | |
| ight me vs illicit.. 5 bars(10 lines) usin letsbeef.com rules//skills etc 4 me.. --------------------------------------------------- this GOATEE-POSER-AINT-CLOSE, fake like 'CONRAD-BLACK' i make 'BOMB-BLAST-TRAPS' like a FOUR-LEAF-CLOVER-HE-HOAX GO-KNEEL-OVER-AND-HOPE like 'MOSQUE-HARD-TIMES', but my 'ROCK-HARD-RHYMES' come from a HOLY-FLOWER-WHO'S-DOPE!
ill shape him like ROTEE-OVER-WIT-DOUGH which he 'SO-LACKING' and when my 'FLOWS-'SPLASHING' this SOAKIN-ROVER-CANT-FLOAT you ROWIN-SLOWER-AND-BROKE my pockets like 'TEAL-LIGHTNING' and ill 'KEEP-STRIKING' you HOE-PIN(HOPING)BOWLERS-GO-BROKE
flatten noobs SO-STEAM-ROLLERS-CANT-COPE these 'RATERS-CLAPPIN' and i get 'GATORS-SNAPPIN' like you were FLOATING-OVER-A MOAT how you COPING-SOBER-IM-DOPE and your 'RAPS-ARE-BUST' cause you 'GAGGING-UP' and so now im POKING-CHOKERS-WITH-SPOKES!!!!
now im DESTROYING-THIS-FOOL, by losin he 'PROVING-FATE' and his 'CREW-BE-FAKE' thazz why they EMPLOYING-THEM-NOOBS ENJOYING-THIS-LOSE? look @ him you 'AMONG-GASPING-SHIT' aint even 'BEGUN-NASTINESS' dont needa be DEPLOYING-THE-RUDE
you CLOYING-I'M-MOVED, and you 'RE-TORTING-WHY?' but i'll 'KEEP-FLOATING-HIGH' like i was BUOYING-IN-BOOZE! my skillz be ANNOYING-THIS-DUDE but now your 'NAME'S-SCREWED' and like a 'GAME-CUBE' i BE-TOYING-WITH-YOU!!!!!
------------------------------------------------------------------ -looks long but it aint i just capitalized things to make it easier to read, i used alot of multies so grade me accordingly and similies etc.. -notes, used wordplay wit hoping bowlers go home (pin bowl ya digg) -used some western vocab if u dont understand hit me -i was ranked under top10 this month JamZ for text on letsbeef.com so i kno wat i did so dont hesitate to ask me for clarification -i put dashes to show multies -second last line, keep floating high like buoying in booze meant it literally and in the way that you're drunk a.k.a high .. - anyways gb i read your verse
Last edited by JamZ on Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:39 am; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : end notes to clarify more things) | |
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JamZ Rookie
Number of posts : 34 Age : 31 Location : Toronto ,Ontario ,Canada Registration date : 2008-08-19
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:56 am | |
| do watchu do and post.. u can write just like i did mine if ya like.. friendly battle no bullshit no dickriders no haters no crew battle things etc etc i unno wat ur like so ima jus post this 2 be on the safe side ehehe anyways gb and anticipating ur spit..
p.s my swaggers different than anyone you've met i got my own style and in canada/america thazzz where its @ | |
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nyLos Moderator
Number of posts : 101 Age : 31 Location : DhAkA BitchEs!!!!! Registration date : 2008-07-28
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Fri Aug 22, 2008 3:44 pm | |
| DAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNN some get this freak off this forum hez setting it on fire | |
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illicit Rookie
Number of posts : 19 Age : 34 Location : UMT, D city Registration date : 2008-07-30
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:06 pm | |
| yo nice verse man....i enjoyed readin it.....n of course it ain't no personal beef....i dun fall fo those bullshits....neways sorry to keep u waitin....jus bin a lil busy.....aite then check it out... | |
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illicit Rookie
Number of posts : 19 Age : 34 Location : UMT, D city Registration date : 2008-07-30
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:07 pm | |
| Jam Z.....son of mrs Nancy....travelled countryside to city....on a roof top journey waist wrapped up in lungi...probably loaded with a penny...n a T shirt fittin tyt lyk he wore bikini
"typical mentality"...no "critical ability"..."lifestyle simplicity"...low "profile activity" financial scaricity turned him into a candy...wen a male's "feelin randy"..Jam Z wud cum "in handy"
wishin it was him watchin celebrities party.....n yo "rough sissy" idol jackd his style frm my CD u spit MBA rap nigga i'm droppin PHD.....even "tough twenty" multies wudn't help u just 2 move me
cuz wen i was poppin wisky...he felt thirsty fo pepsi...n he startd bangin homos cuz i use to pop lesbis my disease's "dissin phoneys"..."screwin emcees" "yappin cheese"...while u kiss asses fo not payin up the fees
how u gon smoke me wen "u choke on cannabis"....n the holy dope ditched u since "u broke on politics" born in land of wanabes....so nigga please.....b4 i cum squeeze u....better fall on yo knees...or u'll b swimmin in my PISS BITCH | |
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JamZ Rookie
Number of posts : 34 Age : 31 Location : Toronto ,Ontario ,Canada Registration date : 2008-08-19
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:36 am | |
| yea yea bro your lines were sick-ass too bro let the voting begin! =] | |
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ZedeX Rookie
Number of posts : 41 Age : 29 Location : dhaka 4 life baby Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:42 am | |
| flow : jamz multies : illicit wordplay : jamz punches : jamz personals : illicit yo dis shts cloooose but im gonna have to say jamz. man both of u came up wit joss lyrics | |
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pRo IMMORTAL
Number of posts : 205 Age : 30 Location : D-hood,FMG,DMD!! Registration date : 2008-07-27
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:25 pm | |
| multies :dammnn JAMZ wordplay : illicit punches : jamz personals : illicit Creativity:Illicit
Overoll:JamZ killd it!!OMFG!! | |
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JamZ Rookie
Number of posts : 34 Age : 31 Location : Toronto ,Ontario ,Canada Registration date : 2008-08-19
| Subject: Re: jamz vs illicit (5 bars/10 lines) Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:31 pm | |
| keep votes fair lol appreciate it and no joke but illicit put up a fuckin good spit | |
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