ey bro.. 15 bars(max.)
u hit it first.

wtf no no no!!!15 bars not allowed....have it a 5 bar battle!

5 bars ?? man its too short...make it 10bars ...OK ?

DEAL DONE!!AYTE!!!

drop yar shits now nna and al1f

post yo' verse al1f ...

Ok bro.....its underway...have patience...nd yo is ur one ready ?

yeh its ommost redy..

whea u at man ? post yo' verse

Yo no offence......nd ppl is ya didnt understand a word just let me kno...
Here goes nothing ::


Nna beware of a lyric's fangs nd influence violence they act like magnitudenal massa-cre
U rep gays in the gay strip-bar u earned a nickname as ' Da ultimate man-slaughterer' \\
No! not mother ur father became pregnant nd gave birth to u bitch out of his ass
Boy skul isn't da option for ya cuz u gave 50 time entrance exam but still couldn't pass\\
U bleed frm ur ass outcast homo' this is da cast(end) for ya Motherfucker cant even spell Eng-lish
Gets dumped by gay frnds pays 2 lesbos for debt u smell bad stinkpot more dan rotten 'Horsepoo-dish\\
Nna the only bitch ass whos got a cursed damned fucking insignificant "Diick"
Rhyming is not da option for ya kid got fuck pigs so sick makes me throw-up u useless piece of "SHHIT" \\ 4
U nd ur mother shoot a porn movie for free nd bbc reported it was the sick-est
Inside u ur just a old retired gay used to yell at ur dad ' Daddy fuck mommy-fast' 'Why will I fuck at-last' \\
Ur a kid who masturbates 10 times a day also helps his father to do it later u lick-it
U arnt fit to face ma rhymes hit ur ball wit ma lyrics u have to quit or become Red-meat\\
When ma driver's dick was out ur mom was here sucking it ' GOD-DAMNED IT'
Nd her xcuse to u was ' I was just there checking it ' kid ' ADMIT-IT' \\
Ur face is so disgusting every1 in FRB havin' a hard time just 'Adjusting'
Even dog's face is much more betta then urs bitch ur face is slowly 'Rusting' \\ 8
Look bitch battling u is just a waste of ma time its useless more than watching 'Bush killing ppl '
Bitch I'm keeping it regiment(simple) for ur fucking amateur brain also keepin' it simple \\
Nna I didnt gave ma 100 % on this one nd one thing ur small cock didn't ever exist-ed
Me killing thousands bitches like u ma 100 % is ultra-violent its hard to resist-it \\ 10

I rote Bush killing ppl becuz..its not a new thing to us.....SO PPL VOTE UP..rememba no politics...PEACE

ki baler formalities lagaiso?..

post ur daamn fuking verses maayn..

Hey ma verse is here....man whom are ya saying ?

to both of ya.. ohkay..

now nna post ur verse man...y ya fuking soo late at dis shit?

Yo fro....have patience..bro...Nna whers ur lyrics..sry...HAHA

Hey yo Alif man. Decent verse but i got some complaints.

You were improving before but it seems you have stopped listening advice to people(including me and FLO) are giving you man. You gotta shorten up your sentences and sort out the flow. Try rapping your verse, not even Jay Z is gonna be able to flow that shit.

And don't always try and use big words to impress people beacause it just makes it more difficult to read, and boring. If your gonna have such big lines you need many more multies. You don't need to be complex. Lemme give you an example.

"Unlike yo mamma pussy, this verse is tight". Very short yet very effective don't ya think?
No complex words.
Anyways man sort yoself out. No offence you get me? I'm trying to help you.

Peace.