Number of posts: 203 Age: 15 Location: D-hood,FMG,DMD!! Registration date: 2008-07-27
Subject: Re: { mR sUiCidE vs hELL bOy } [[ episode no 2 ]] Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:33 pm
AL1F wrote:
Here it goes.......last tyme not 100% now muhaha..
Here it goes ::
I bitchslap rappers so hard it give em whip-lash they see ma rhyme wish if they could dash Bitch ur gonna crash wit ma lyrics pain-stance ur useless just a piece of old rusted trash \\ Last time I had mercy on ya but now smash ur brain hard burn 'em turn 'en into ash In da flash of ur eye I made ur tongue-tied ass now tell me wheres ur motherfucking tricks-at ? \\ Common sense should tell ya not to battle against me I fly like a butterfly stink like a bee Drops words harder than MCs kill 'em through ma lyrically blessed wit now bend down to ur knees to me\\ Fuck u whore its time for me to explode ur deaf son of a bitch rite raps like pinky craps son Its time to bring out da guns crack ya head bitch u'll be feeling as if ma lyrics drops bombs\\ Suddam nd Laden they used to be ma chamcha din raat handle maros baap're kos kechaa abba kecha Kuttar baccha ur dad nd mom used to fuck for 10 tk. da nicest thing some1 told u is 'Kutta're Chuda' \\ 5 Tur shona chira bichi futa dudu dia dud por'a khai'te boi'le bogul uthaiya paad maros bitch ass hetro-sexual I'm gonna burst ur Thoracic cavity destroy ur vocal chord kid take notice its time to be bio-logical \\ Bandir poo battle kortasos naki tur ma'er dud chustasos I'm not getting anything Most devilish sin performed by a man is calling u a ' Human-being' u did'nt heard kan dia dhukamu pin \\ Ur a racist everybody in FRB knows dat so punk ass motherfucking bitch fuck off One more word I'm gonna hit ur bichis like a golf ball last call for ya be4 I pop ur ass off \\ Ur mom used to be on ma driver nd kajer pola's dick 24/7 she missed not even a single day Ur dad shoot a gay porn with ten gays without getting paid its like they made ur dad a modern day slave \\ FINISHER : Motherfucking son of a bitch watch as I annihilate u I'm a advancer now give me da answer Admit ur a loser cant never beat me sucker watch it as ma lyrics destroy u qiucker than a cancer \\
Ppl vote up.....no politics..no dick ryding votes....PEACE
well i got lotsa things to tell alif so ALIF please read this carefully:- 1st o all in this line-"Drops words harder than MCs kill 'em through ma lyrically blessed wit now bend down to ur knees to me" ^^the whole thing can be made shorter nd briefed nd da next part "kill 'em through ma lyrically blessed wit now bend down to ur knees to me" could've been used as another bar so take care of it man.Try da nails to hit hard but with shorts yw!!get tht !!
Dud ma next complains will also go on lyk this tht u write hell lota shit 2gdr in a line!!try summin up nd hit hard.All da bars are of the same type;just huge lines.Take care of this shits nikka. But i like ur punches man its worthy.Nd remember this too-1 bar only dsnt mean tht 2 lines but 1 bar means actually that 2 rhyming lines.ayte?get tht son.
Well ma vote's hea- Punches:Alif Flow:tie Multis:None Wordplay:none Overall:ma vote for suicide for his constant breath flow nd well-nuf punches!1
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Subject: Re: { mR sUiCidE vs hELL bOy } [[ episode no 2 ]] 
Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:33 pm
.. btw kutta ami na tow tui 
