ai'te.. its on..
may da worst man lose


5bars
gud luck

Are you ready for my hit? I flow steady like the waves of a tele I must admit
Im the real shit dat ever lived, I fuqed your mom so hard dat shes missing a clit
Im the overextend go getter, im the real owner trend setter
Nna, time after time I have defeated you, my rhymes sting like lime superheated too
Ur mom likes missionary and doggy too, ur words r dog doo mine r chicken cordon bleu
All you can do to me is sue, my words r jubilee you suck frum every point of view
Haha my fans give me my cue, my rhymes are gna explode like c2
Ur texts are like ur sex life, so desolate and bear its sad that u don’t even care
I lay it down like 2pac at the prime of his life,u fag u been in more guys than a surgical knife
My rhymes stick to u like superglue u been diminished,I murdured you,in this ur finished,



Tele: Television
C2: plastic explosives, such as tnt and dynamite
chicken cordon bleu: French cuisine style chicken


keep it real broda;)

where the fuck is the CHOCOLATE..??

nna... its summer now.. wake up boi,its no tym for HYBERNATING...!!

post ur lollypop verse..

mr suicide

you spit with your brain, dont leave it to shame, 
i cant wait to see you, when i smoke u in vain, come get some game, cause when im finished i'll leave you busted and claimed, 
bought sold, then recycled, shot, killed, missed the life cycle, 
dont mess with me alif cause you know i'll kill ya in fame, 
the dollaz i be pumpin out my 2-4's the same, 
gripin this shit up and holla pimp within the game, 
im in this game leavin imprinted inflames, 
spit out the good nook, look this nigga got shuck, 
back off before i tell them the secret, bout when yo bitch got another look, 
its called C.L.A.P., back in the day, they called it HIV, 
the last line before i go, next time you call some1 out, 
make sure yo bitch aint on the other side, SUCKIN WITHOUT A DOUBT!!

p3ace! 1
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u callin e'ry1 out ?? lol

@last u did..

Wow!Tightt!!..Nna ur vocab were awsome..But i didnt get the last part homie..So yah My vote goes to Mr Suicide..Crap!your flying man

***applause nna fo the lined i mentiond***
multis:nna[bought sold, then recycled, shot, killed, missed the life cycle]dammnnn!!
Flow:nna
Vocabs:Suicide
metaphors:Suicide
Punches:nna

Overoll:NnA

thanks pro - tha's like da 1st time eve i got yo' vote =P

nd dis is da 2nd tym dah i didn

i hv seen or heard sum stuffs of nna'z verse sumwhere... but i cant remember where..so dnt take it any serious..

but i just feel sth..


..my vote goes to suicide...

"bought sold, then recycled, shot, killed, missed the life cycle"
^^ this line is filled with multis:P..da underlind ones !
but "dont mess with me alif cause you know i'll kill ya in fame" removed all da energy whch was being up on da previous line.
So 1 bar shud be filled with multis,nt a line.Nd da flow dsnt cum hea too so try managin ur flow!

SO u cud've writtn this line in alter to tht-
Gargle-shit|spit-vomit|tryna heat Santa's Pole
*Santa's Pole means North Pole..u knw ppl say santa cums dwn from dea so hea u hv a metaphor wid a multi adjoined together.This gives the voter total satisfaction to ur verse hence,poppin a vote to u!...nd da line means tht Suicide tryna heat/destroy smth of ur possession but he cant cus North Pole is dammnn big nd heatin it will take ages!!get tht?!

| <--means a alter beat/flow


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waa ?? i din bite lyrics

i be bac l8a
goin out fo' dinner

i told ya pro..i forgot..but i guess i saw sum shits sumwhere.. but dnt take it seriously.. coz i dn remember..

..nd yeah.. if u want u can think logically..

newaiz... i will vote for suicide.. ..

"All you can do to me is sue, my words r jubilee you suck frum every point of view
Haha my fans give me my cue, my rhymes are gna explode like c2 "

great 1 dost..

rilly enjoyed ur verse..