jamz vs illicit 5 bars 10 lines ggg

yo hit yo verse man.......let's do it within 5 bars.....u down hommie???

ight me vs illicit.. 5 bars(10 lines)
usin letsbeef.com rules//skills etc 4 me..
---------------------------------------------------
this GOATEE-POSER-AINT-CLOSE, fake like 'CONRAD-BLACK' i make 'BOMB-BLAST-TRAPS' like a FOUR-LEAF-CLOVER-HE-HOAX
GO-KNEEL-OVER-AND-HOPE like 'MOSQUE-HARD-TIMES', but my 'ROCK-HARD-RHYMES' come from a HOLY-FLOWER-WHO'S-DOPE!

ill shape him like ROTEE-OVER-WIT-DOUGH which he 'SO-LACKING' and when my 'FLOWS-'SPLASHING' this SOAKIN-ROVER-CANT-FLOAT
you ROWIN-SLOWER-AND-BROKE my pockets like 'TEAL-LIGHTNING' and ill 'KEEP-STRIKING' you HOE-PIN(HOPING)BOWLERS-GO-BROKE

flatten noobs SO-STEAM-ROLLERS-CANT-COPE these 'RATERS-CLAPPIN' and i get 'GATORS-SNAPPIN' like you were FLOATING-OVER-A MOAT
how you COPING-SOBER-IM-DOPE and your 'RAPS-ARE-BUST' cause you 'GAGGING-UP' and so now im POKING-CHOKERS-WITH-SPOKES!!!!

now im DESTROYING-THIS-FOOL, by losin he 'PROVING-FATE' and his 'CREW-BE-FAKE' thazz why they EMPLOYING-THEM-NOOBS
ENJOYING-THIS-LOSE? look @ him you 'AMONG-GASPING-SHIT' aint even 'BEGUN-NASTINESS' dont needa be DEPLOYING-THE-RUDE

you CLOYING-I'M-MOVED, and you 'RE-TORTING-WHY?' but i'll 'KEEP-FLOATING-HIGH' like i was BUOYING-IN-BOOZE!
my skillz be ANNOYING-THIS-DUDE but now your 'NAME'S-SCREWED' and like a 'GAME-CUBE' i BE-TOYING-WITH-YOU!!!!!

------------------------------------------------------------------
-looks long but it aint i just capitalized things to make it easier to read, i used alot of multies so grade me accordingly and similies etc..
-notes, used wordplay wit hoping bowlers go home (pin bowl ya digg)
-used some western vocab if u dont understand hit me
-i was ranked under top10 this month JamZ for text on letsbeef.com so i kno wat i did so dont hesitate to ask me for clarification
-i put dashes to show multies
-second last line, keep floating high like buoying in booze meant it literally and in the way that you're drunk a.k.a high ..
- anyways gb i read your verse

do watchu do and post.. u can write just like i did mine if ya like.. friendly battle no bullshit no dickriders no haters no crew battle things etc etc i unno wat ur like so ima jus post this 2 be on the safe side ehehe
anyways gb and anticipating ur spit..

p.s
my swaggers different than anyone you've met i got my own style and in canada/america thazzz where its @

DAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNN
some get this freak off this forum
hez setting it on fire

yo nice verse man....i enjoyed readin it.....n of course it ain't no personal beef....i dun fall fo those bullshits....neways sorry to keep u waitin....jus bin a lil busy.....aite then check it out...

Jam Z.....son of mrs Nancy....travelled countryside to city....on a roof top journey
waist wrapped up in lungi...probably loaded with a penny...n a T shirt fittin tyt lyk he wore bikini

"typical mentality"...no "critical ability"..."lifestyle simplicity"...low "profile activity"
financial scaricity turned him into a candy...wen a male's "feelin randy"..Jam Z wud cum "in handy"

wishin it was him watchin celebrities party.....n yo "rough sissy" idol jackd his style frm my CD
u spit MBA rap nigga i'm droppin PHD.....even "tough twenty" multies wudn't help u just 2 move me

cuz wen i was poppin wisky...he felt thirsty fo pepsi...n he startd bangin homos cuz i use to pop lesbis
my disease's "dissin phoneys"..."screwin emcees" "yappin cheese"...while u kiss asses fo not payin up the fees

how u gon smoke me wen "u choke on cannabis"....n the holy dope ditched u since "u broke on politics"
born in land of wanabes....so nigga please.....b4 i cum squeeze u....better fall on yo knees...or u'll b swimmin in my PISS BITCH

yea yea bro your lines were sick-ass too bro
let the voting begin! =]

flow : jamz
multies : illicit
wordplay : jamz
punches : jamz
personals : illicit
yo dis shts cloooose but im gonna have to say jamz. man both of u came up wit joss lyrics

multies :dammnn JAMZ
wordplay : illicit
punches : jamz
personals : illicit
Creativity:Illicit

Overoll:JamZ killd it!!OMFG!!

keep votes fair lol appreciate it and no joke but illicit put up a fuckin good spit