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PostSubject: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 8:12 am

ey bro.. 15 bars(max.)
u hit it first.
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 4:59 pm

wtf no no no!!!15 bars not allowed....have it a 5 bar battle!

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:04 pm

5 bars ?? man its too short...make it 10bars ...OK ?
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:22 pm

DEAL DONE!!AYTE!!!

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:37 pm

drop yar shits now nna and al1f

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:30 pm

post yo' verse al1f ...
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:36 pm

Ok bro.....its underway...have patience...nd yo is ur one ready ?
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:43 pm

yeh its ommost redy..
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:26 pm

whea u at man ? post yo' verse
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:27 pm

Yo no offence......nd ppl is ya didnt understand a word just let me kno...
Here goes nothing ::


Nna beware of a lyric's fangs nd influence violence they act like magnitudenal massa-cre
U rep gays in the gay strip-bar u earned a nickname as ' Da ultimate man-slaughterer' \\
No! not mother ur father became pregnant nd gave birth to u bitch out of his ass
Boy skul isn't da option for ya cuz u gave 50 time entrance exam but still couldn't pass\\
U bleed frm ur ass outcast homo' this is da cast(end) for ya Motherfucker cant even spell Eng-lish
Gets dumped by gay frnds pays 2 lesbos for debt u smell bad stinkpot more dan rotten 'Horsepoo-dish\\
Nna the only bitch ass whos got a cursed damned fucking insignificant "Diick"
Rhyming is not da option for ya kid got fuck pigs so sick makes me throw-up u useless piece of "SHHIT" \\ 4
U nd ur mother shoot a porn movie for free nd bbc reported it was the sick-est
Inside u ur just a old retired gay used to yell at ur dad ' Daddy fuck mommy-fast' 'Why will I fuck at-last' \\
Ur a kid who masturbates 10 times a day also helps his father to do it later u lick-it
U arnt fit to face ma rhymes hit ur ball wit ma lyrics u have to quit or become Red-meat\\
When ma driver's dick was out ur mom was here sucking it ' GOD-DAMNED IT'
Nd her xcuse to u was ' I was just there checking it ' kid ' ADMIT-IT' \\
Ur face is so disgusting every1 in FRB havin' a hard time just 'Adjusting'
Even dog's face is much more betta then urs bitch ur face is slowly 'Rusting' \\ 8
Look bitch battling u is just a waste of ma time its useless more than watching 'Bush killing ppl '
Bitch I'm keeping it regiment(simple) for ur fucking amateur brain also keepin' it simple \\
Nna I didnt gave ma 100 % on this one nd one thing ur small cock didn't ever exist-ed
Me killing thousands bitches like u ma 100 % is ultra-violent its hard to resist-it \\ 10

I rote Bush killing ppl becuz..its not a new thing to us.....SO PPL VOTE UP..rememba no politics...PEACE
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:28 pm

ki baler formalities lagaiso?..

post ur daamn fuking verses maayn..

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:30 pm

Hey ma verse is here....man whom are ya saying ?
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:31 pm

to both of ya.. ohkay..

now nna post ur verse man...y ya fuking soo late at dis shit?

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:35 pm

Yo fro....have patience..bro...Nna whers ur lyrics..sry...HAHA
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:40 pm

Hey yo Alif man. Decent verse but i got some complaints.

You were improving before but it seems you have stopped listening advice to people(including me and FLO) are giving you man. You gotta shorten up your sentences and sort out the flow. Try rapping your verse, not even Jay Z is gonna be able to flow that shit.

And don't always try and use big words to impress people beacause it just makes it more difficult to read, and boring. If your gonna have such big lines you need many more multies. You don't need to be complex. Lemme give you an example.

"Unlike yo mamma pussy, this verse is tight". Very short yet very effective don't ya think?
No complex words.
Anyways man sort yoself out. No offence you get me? I'm trying to help you.

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:42 pm

yea al1f...

...no1 wants to RAP or READ such long sentences... shorten them up maayn from next tym

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:55 pm

Hey thankx Bangey .....nd Fro...next time it wll not happen again...nd yo but still vote man.....for just today pls pls read dat...nd give vote to the best man.
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:57 pm

ohkay..

but wea's the fuking verse of NNA..?? :@..daammn.... throw yar shit kiddo

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:01 am

Yeah We all are waiting for ya..
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:24 am

This young bitch is too busy having a wank; He still can't produce though...
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:28 am

hey - i been waitin fo' u all day..i was out

hea's mine to u AL1F :

i m sich o' hearin u can actually spit//
afta this battle..ud forget the word "MC" and turn into Khaleda Zia's ugly shit//

u lyin to every1 on this site that u a crip//
trinna mess wid me is gonna leav u wid a busted lip//

time fo' me to pick up the mack creep into yo' house from the back and have yo' family all in black//
i'll hav more bullets up yo' teeth than a dentist floss on sumbody who got plaque//

i read ur shit sadly caaz they been written so badly//
me i spit madly en i'll kill u gladly and show u where the body bags be//

this is only the begginin and u wavin the flag for a truce//
u bout to catch mo' shit than Isaac Bruce//

i'm a prince as u can see//
my IQ level is 9 hundred twenty//

u'll bleed plenty//
like in the club late at nyt u knw da spot aint empty(kna i mean)//

girls love me//
its a curse God gave me//

i sting like a bee like Simin Ali//
i been actin tha's why y'all see me on tv//

now im ova these battles i dun wanna win//
but u know i be bac l8a to giv u a spin//

and stab u in the guts//
caaz thats what u feel wen i bust a lyric..........straight up the but//(haha)
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:31 am

Pretty nice .....dawg....PPL ITS TIME FOR VOTING.......be active
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:34 am

ayo thanks man.
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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:46 am

That was close. Lets tally it up.

Creative : Alif. Although NnA was to, his stuff was a bit random. When did Alif claim to be a crip?
Flow : NnA. No question about it.
Wordplay : Alif
Vocab : Alif
Punches : NnA
Multies : Equal

This was quite a close battle. When NnA started, i thought he was gonna rip in to Alif and really kill him. But NnA, your last few verses were weak man, you gotta hit harder than that at the end. Alif had the consistensy.

Overall : Alif

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PostSubject: Re: NnA v/s AL1F   Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:53 am

Hey thankx Bangey......so I guess its

NnA--0-1--AL1F
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